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    Neverman said:
    What do you mean by "awkward"?
    Isn't the angle correct?

    The perspective makes it look like the wolf has a cock on his chest

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  • Neverman said:
    What do you mean by "awkward"?
    Isn't the angle correct?

    No, The white dog's angle is very incorrect. The perspective you gave his torso makes him look as if he's bisecting the wolf's body while his legs lie somewhere else behind him.

    If we looked at this from a different angle, I fear the dog's body would be cut in half or deformed horrifically.

    The penis seems to be coming from an awkward place as well. Imagine how long it'd have to be to be going into the dog's mouth with his head facing UP (somehow). Also consider that his face looks to be at least a foot or two away from the wolf.

    Speaking of heads, I don't usually comment on them, since hair on animals and face shape/detail is up to individual style but that dog's head -really- bugs me. He looks like a horrible cross between Charlie Brown (Elmer Fudd also comes to mind) and Snoopy. Why is his head a cue-ball despite having fur and why is his face so flat while the wolf has a muzzle?

    You should probably work more in construction and thinking your characters out in 3 dimensions before trying to play with funny angles like this. Your artwork is too flat to pull it off at the moment.

    Keep drawing.

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  • Well, it was my very first Furry-Pic, i made.
    So, don't be so harsh...^^°
    But i'm very thankful for critic!

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