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Team Building by Xennos (Animated by Bartolomeo w/ sound)

Art by: Xennos ; Animation by: Bartolomeo

Hi guys!
This is my first finished animation... That's why I'll be happy if you leave me here a comment regarding your opinion on animation, its quality and maybe some tips.

(More work and animations are already on the way ;P )

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    This is my first finished animation

    Fucking knocked it out of the park.

    10/10 animation.

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  • Honestly a great animation. If I was trying to find a problem the best I can do is the hair. I’m not fully sure but it’s movement just seems a little off

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  • great animation! audio quality/mixing could've been a bit better but it is nonetheless more than good enough.

    love it <3

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  • This is probably my favorite cub blowjob video ever. And I assume its shota? God I wish it was longer. Adore his eyes looking up.

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  • very good; excellent sound design, a good amount of variety to the animation and progression to the pacing... hard to think of any constructive criticism to offer

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  • Framerate is one of those things that go slightly to subjective area, however I strongly feel with stuff like 3D and after effects, you should use 30 or 60 FPS. This is from the simple fact that this isn't presented on film in theater, it's digital file played on device with most likely 60Hz display. 24 FPS would show up normally on film, 42ms for frame, but on 60Hz display it needs to keep some frames 33ms and then one frame 50ms to keep up the speed.
    This is because animation style like this, the movement is constant and point-to-point, so you do get that slight hitching if you focus too much on moving things and as background is literally constantly moving it becomes more visible.

    This is also why even on flash era, most used 60 FPS.

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  • This is fantastic. I don't think I can leave any more constructive about the art or animation than has already been left, so I'll just say that I thoroughly enjoyed this.

    I love fantasizing about boys in sports uniforms. The thing I love most about shota and cub art is that it gives me a chance to safely fantasize in a way that isn't going to cause any harm. I'm sure I'm not the only one who benefits this way from it.

    I'd love to commission you for more art, but unfortunately I live in a country where it isn't safe for me to do that when it's for shota and cub art. I hope that people who would still be safe doing so can commission you so that I get to see more in the future from you.

    Thank you for creating this for the community!

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  • mairo said:
    Framerate is one of those things that go slightly to subjective area, however I strongly feel with stuff like 3D and after effects, you should use 30 or 60 FPS. This is from the simple fact that this isn't presented on film in theater, it's digital file played on device with most likely 60Hz display. 24 FPS would show up normally on film, 42ms for frame, but on 60Hz display it needs to keep some frames 33ms and then one frame 50ms to keep up the speed.
    This is because animation style like this, the movement is constant and point-to-point, so you do get that slight hitching if you focus too much on moving things and as background is literally constantly moving it becomes more visible.

    This is also why even on flash era, most used 60 FPS.

    I think the background moving would be the character being sucked moving their head

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  • pedelda said:
    I think the background moving would be the character being sucked moving their head

    Yep! That's how I interpreted it too. All of the movement, including that, made it feel immersive.

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  • Amazing animation so I struggled to find a tip. I think making the head tilt a little tiny bit and have his head tilt back a bit will make it more realistic

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  • I call bullshit. This is way too good of an animation to be your first one ever made. Where's the rest of the, i must have more.

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  • breese101 said:
    I call bullshit. This is way too good of an animation to be your first one ever made. Where's the rest of the, i must have more.

    Pretty sure it's an advanced tweening, but it's impressive to add the eye movement when there was none from the first image.

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