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The Three Commandments - Page 20

They got a promotion! Surely everything is going to be ok right? Right?

Small info point: The Great Warden is the highest ranking member of the Order. Their dragon is responsible for breeding the new generation of Riders until a new Great Warden defeats them and replaces them. Lorath, despite looking mega handsome in his new armor is not very interested in fulfilling his duties. Wonder why!

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    However, by becoming one as they had, they reached the pinnacle of the order in a matter of years.

    Ah yes, so dragon dick got her to the top of the leaderboards.

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  • All these commandments are approaching the same point from different directions and managing to avoid saying what really matters. They only need one commandment.

    1: DO YOUR GODDAMN DUTY.

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  • This last one is a real stretch. Is that the only male dragon in their land? Could she not spit his semen into a turkey baster and give it to the breeders?

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  • They cannot fuck their riders because they could run out of dragons

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    WHAT THE F...

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  • thedrizzle404 said:
    This last one is a real stretch. Is that the only male dragon in their land? Could she not spit his semen into a turkey baster and give it to the breeders?

    well think of it like this, maybe the rule was made to make it so other riders didn't do it, because if this happened with one rider, what would happen if more riders were fucking their dragons? and with making rank so fast it would likely seem tempting to do so
    edit: I just read the description, it's a thing where the highest rank dragon breeds all the females, so it's a sort of evolution style thing, making it so the strongest dragon breeds.

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  • oh...now it makes sense...honestly i didn't think about this scenario, I'd figure she would get with another anthro and he would get jealous... but since he is a great "specimen" it would make sense to have him mate for another clutch of eggs to you know continue the tradition... but what will happen now?

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  • ... perhaps grief might strike one of them. I got a weird feeling one of them is gonna be well... gone soon.

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  • thedrizzle404 said:
    This last one is a real stretch. Is that the only male dragon in their land? Could she not spit his semen into a turkey baster and give it to the breeders?

    nah but it's all about their genes they figure since they have reached the top he is the peak of his species fmso his offspring should care some of his qualities... you know genetics, survival of the fittest etc while sure yes there might be other males do you want a mare impregnated by a champion horse or a random male? i think this is basically what they are going for

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  • So the problems seems to stem from the duties demanded by the higher position? That kinda sucks...

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  • kustav said:
    well think of it like this, maybe the rule was made to make it so other riders didn't do it, because if this happened with one rider, what would happen if more riders were fucking their dragons? and with making rank so fast it would likely seem tempting to do so
    edit: I just read the description, it's a thing where the highest rank dragon breeds all the females, so it's a sort of evolution style thing, making it so the strongest dragon breeds.

    Except that there's nothing stopping Lorath from fucking feme dragons on top of fucking his rider. Jenna still gets Lorath, Lorath gets Jenna as well as other females, and the Status Quo remains the same; except Lorath is now a little bit more tired from being a horndog, er horndragon?

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  • furryvorelover01 said:
    nah but it's all about their genes they figure since they have reached the top he is the peak of his species fmso his offspring should care some of his qualities... you know genetics, survival of the fittest etc while sure yes there might be other males do you want a mare impregnated by a champion horse or a random male? i think this is basically what they are going for

    Even if their goal was to employ eugenics like that, nothing is stopping him from simply impregnating female dragons as part of his duty rather than for love. It's not like they'd need impregnated that often. And in the off-chance he absolutely refuses to spill his seed anywhere other than his gf she could still employ the turkey baster option.

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  • You're all looking at this all wrong.

    The real reason why this isn't okay is because the Warden's dragon impregnating all the available female dragons means that all the other dragon riders can carry on their own clandestine liaisons with their own dragons when nobody's looking.

    By ascending to the position of ultimate responsibility and then not acting on it, she's preventing everyone ELSE from secretly getting their dragon cock!

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  • But how this great warden breeding will work with female dragon?
    They have some breeding olympics for males or something?

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  • Its a somewhat reasonable explanation for this plot relevant commandment. But what if the great warden dragon is female or gay? Some second in line or artificial insemination rule could have been added to the rulebook. Making this commandment sorta unnecessary.

    <sarcasm>
    Now this comic is completely unbelieveable and I cant fap to it anymore
    </sarcasm>

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  • oh. now i see why no mating with male dragons became a rule...
    they wont bone any other thing :/

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  • It makes sense to get the best from the best, and if that can't be done, things get a lot more complicated.
    I'm guessing that guy that saw them earlier is now thinking about how suspect their closeness looked (not that getting on friendly with a dragon is a bad thing by itself).

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  • Yeah, that's a reaaaal stretch there. If they got so much better at doing their job because they were a couple, that should have been the priority. Also the dragons are sapient beings and requiring them to be selectively bred like livestock is horribly unethical.

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  • shiitake said:
    All these commandments are approaching the same point from different directions and managing to avoid saying what really matters. They only need one commandment.

    1: DO YOUR GODDAMN DUTY.

    Kinda archaic, seeing as the dragons are by all s sentient and cognizant. Fully free will beings ought not to be directed by anyone, they ought to be fully free.

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  • mmm so they lose the war by default after an invasion cause no eggs no new soldiers.

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  • atore1 said:
    They cannot fuck their riders because they could run out of dragons

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    WHAT THE F...

    Unless it makes more dragons anyway ...

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  • I can see this Alpha Male breeds the available females because he is the Prime Specimen thing going on here. Especially if there are issues with few males in a generation can really reach that peak potential. You'd want that for a breeding program - putting him to stud as it were. Championship race horses are highly desired to sire the next generation after all.

    There also seems to be a point here the author may be making that has been overlooked. Going back a bit we see that the relationship they have has become intimate, strong and "..they had eyes for only each other." This right there is important if the nature of their mating between Rider and Dragon has become an emotional bond ( Dragon Riders of Pern?) that would prevent the dragon from actually wanting/ or being able to perform reasonably with a female dragon. Mental/ emotional lockup. He finds his rider beautiful, and so doesn't find females of his own species attractive anymore? Or it maybe as base as the amount of seed he can generate that's all going into his rider...

    I'm reminded of the starting comic where the rider and her dragon are a mated pair but he still has sex with the female dragon that chases after him, but only when his rider s in does he get off.

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  • darkness_listens said:
    I can see this Alpha Male breeds the available females because he is the Prime Specimen thing going on here. Especially if there are issues with few males in a generation can really reach that peak potential. You'd want that for a breeding program - putting him to stud as it were. Championship race horses are highly desired to sire the next generation after all.

    There also seems to be a point here the author may be making that has been overlooked. Going back a bit we see that the relationship they have has become intimate, strong and "..they had eyes for only each other." This right there is important if the nature of their mating between Rider and Dragon has become an emotional bond ( Dragon Riders of Pern?) that would prevent the dragon from actually wanting/ or being able to perform reasonably with a female dragon. Mental/ emotional lockup. He finds his rider beautiful, and so doesn't find females of his own species attractive anymore? Or it maybe as base as the amount of seed he can generate that's all going into his rider...

    I'm reminded of the starting comic where the rider and her dragon are a mated pair but he still has sex with the female dragon that chases after him, but only when his rider s in does he get off.

    A lot of people are reading into this too far. The last says it all. "All the good seed was going elsewhere." That's the lesson, likely. The rider's addicted to dragon dick, and the dragon's all too willing to feed the addiction of his rider (someone he's developed a deep bond with). But males have a refractory period and need time to build up a supply again besides that. If she's draining him morning, noon, and night as the previous page says (every idle moment, sometimes during training), when the breeders come around asking if he's ready to breed up the new clutch he's going to because he's not in the mood or just can't perform because he's JUST given his rider a good dicking.

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  • j-90 said:
    So the problems seems to stem from the duties demanded by the higher position? That kinda sucks...

    Here's a solution, don't aspire to be on the top of the ladder were unwanted complications linger. That way what matters most to you as a couple is all you have to worry about. Politics is never good in the bedroom, or in this case, in your carrier and life. It will get between you, if not end you, always.

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  • shiitake said:
    All these commandments are approaching the same point from different directions and managing to avoid saying what really matters. They only need one commandment.

    1: DO YOUR GODDAMN DUTY.

    2: DON'T BE AN ASSHAT

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  • Well, I paid the Patreon toll to look ahead on this one... Not got long to go until this catches up, but I won't spoil it. Awesome art, but... Yeah. I hope to every god in existence that this order burns in the fires of hell. The commandments are basically the leadership of the order not taking the blame for their own failings while at the same time refusing to learn from them. The guy who cut up his dragon? Shouldn't have been let into the order to begin with because he was too sickly and frail, and even then he was placed into a frontline role rather than one of healer or scholar. Yet for some reason the incompetent Wardens and Great Warden did both of those things and turned him into a ticking time bomb! The guy who rebelled? The Great Warden screwed him over by refusing to follow the etiquette of the challenge and also sparked the smouldering ember that was the rider's ego into a roaring flame of rebellion by not accepting the challenge and smacking him down to teach him some humility.

    And now this... I tell you, there's gotta be some kind of side effect of partnering with a dragon that makes you become like them in some manner, because this thing REEKS of 'alpha male comes first, everyone else gets to screw off'. Seriously, with this kind of breeding system how are most of the dragons within this order, which hatches it's own drakes from a captive population, not inbred to the point of mutation due to being distant genetic relatives from an ever dwindling gene pool because the alpha gets breeding rights at the expense of all others? Given the length of time this order has seemingly operated for, even with the occasional male giving their own genetic donations on the sly, most of the populace are likely half brothers and sisters at this point and genetic defects should be through the roof.

    Then there's the problem of this system somehow not resulting in open rebellion on behalf of the dragons and their riders as breeding rights are removed from otherwise successful male drakes just because they aren't quite on par with the alpha male. It's bad enough that your partner, a sentient being with just as much intellect and communcation capacity as yourself, is denied the ability to have kids with the mate they love but this is in effect slavery. And what happens to a slave who disobeys too often? Nothing good, of course.

    Loving your dragon shouldn't be the crime. Forcing your dragon into a tremendously stupid organization wide breeding program that relies exclusively on a single alpha and robs them of free agency is. Again, this is just the Great Warden, the other Wardens and the rest of the order divesting themselves of blame for an issue that is exclusively of their making. The issues with their breeding program could have been seen coming a thousand years prior to this and rectified, instead it was allowed to continue unaltered until this very issue inevitably arose. Yet again though, the Order dodges actually learning lessons and implementing them to better themselves, and instead the commandments iconize the perpetrators and turn them into morals for the lower ranks to adhere to while the upper echelons of the order deflect the blame from themselves for allowing these things to happen and do nothing to actually rectify the problem at the source instead of demonizing the symptoms caused be it.

    So... Yeah. Great art, but the story tumbled off a cliff due to this whole breeding program thing. Would have worked if the dragons weren't shown to be sentient and able to talk, but as we know they are this particular piece of story makes no sense whatsoever and results in the comic as a whole dropping into the 'the last act ruined it' bin.

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  • cutest_mew said:
    well think of it like this, maybe the rule was made to make it so other riders didn't do it, because if this happened with one rider, what would happen if more riders were fucking their dragons? and with making rank so fast it would likely seem tempting to do so
    edit: I just read the description, it's a thing where the highest rank dragon breeds all the females, so it's a sort of evolution style thing, making it so the strongest dragon breeds.

    But that's a stupid system as well. The position depends on the teamwork of dragon and rider. It doesn't mean that he's the strongest dragon just because he has that job.

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  • I fail to understand why they couldn’t just nab some of his spunk and artificially inseminate some of the other dragons?

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