input, kit, condom crusader, rubber lass, timewinder, and etc (condom crusader (series) and etc) created by kitsune youkai
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Condom Crusader And The Gaping Gateways - Page 08

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Main plot : kitsuneyoukai
Writing staff for dialog: kitsuneyoukai, Jewelwriter, CriticalPanda, Zephyrotica, and 1 anonymous boi
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i really really hope this is the best way and pace i could of done... but i bet its not x.x agh... only 1 of my writers had any input for this page, busy i suppose. but yeah revealing holka, revealing that the consortium isn't friendly toward the just yiff league, and that goodness, input is a former sidekick for a consortium member?! o3o! so many things! who is techno mechno vertis and where are they now? what was operation sun strike down?

also! i hope people aren't mad about the design of Timewinder, because i wanted to go with no legs, since i think snakes with legs looks most silly, i was also VERY tempted to not give her arms, opting for robot arms, but then someone made a good point of 'well then why boobs">https://subscribestar.adult/posts/1550509

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    In regards to the description, I think it works well. The pronoun game between the last two s took some time to understand, though.

    'them' = Consortium of Cohorts (thought it might have meant the snake lady since no one refers to her pronouns)
    'he' = Input (again thought it might be snake lady, plus Vibramare knows Crusader and Lass know Input from previous missions, so "You don't recognize him?" is confusing)

    Can't have every reference be a proper noun, though, and it still works out in the end! Love seeing a big scaly gal even if she doesn't necessarily like our protagonists

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  • Good golly, I can just feel the near-lethal levels of pure sass Timewinder applied to those air quotes around the word "heroes" there, I'm surprised crusader didn't just keel over on the spot.

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  • I really dig Timewinder's design I think giving her the lower snake half body was the right call as otherwise the legs would have made her more generically reptilian. I do like the robot arms idea but maybe save that for a more tech-themed snake hero/villian.

    Also Firecat propositioning Input? A reference to "Deep Dive"? 🤔

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    queerbrony69 said:
    I really dig Timewinder's design I think giving her the lower snake half body was the right call as otherwise the legs would have made her more generically reptilian. I do like the robot arms idea but maybe save that for a more tech-themed snake hero/villian.

    Also Firecat propositioning Input? A reference to "Deep Dive"? 🤔

    "Condom Crusader and the Deep Dive - Page 4" when she thought Input meant training as in fucking.

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  • I rather like how Timewinder has a band right over where her cloaca should be, great attention to detail there!

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