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Hello lovely people, it's been a moment :)

Here is a VERY belated Valentine's Day animation, sorry for the delay and I hope it was worth the wait ^-^"

It took way longer than I anticipated but I'm quiet satisfied with how it turned out and I've learnt a ton of things from it ! :D

And also : Characters name reveal ! :o

Happy Valentine

Story :

Since the events of Christmas, life has become a little more interesting if one can say so.
Indeed, since that day, intimate moments have become simpler between Mixy and Eden.

Nevertheless, in order not to rush her little angel, Mixy waited for a very special moment to begin a more in-depth relationship with her son.

The chosen day was of course Valentine's Day, which lent itself perfectly for this.
It was also on this day of the year that, at the time, Mixy was put in a relationship with the one she thought was the man of her life... you know the rest.

Mixy decided to spend the day as she would have done with the chosen one of her heart on this special occasion. This time for sure, she knows her Valentine was the right one though.

Of course, compromises had to be made because Eden is obviously younger than all the other men she had dated with.

The day was therefore adapted for her little one, a chance that she knows perfectly what Eden likes. A few moments to play together, a walk in the park before going to one of the little one's favorite restaurants, not forgetting the traditional chocolates to share once at home.

Back after a very busy day, Mixy asked Eden to wait quietly for her in bed because she has something very special for him, she then went in another room for a brief moment.
Eden knew well what was going to happen... but this time would be very different from the other days.

His Mom came back in the bedroom, only dressed with fine lingerie that she only wears for special occasions.

...It was in this same bed that he was conceived where Eden would in turn discover how to conceive... sort of. :)

Thank you Mrs.L for the VA <3

HD file at source !

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    Id love to see alternate versions. Like him forcibly cumming in her or accidentally doing it and impregnating her

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  • While Mixy's VA is good (even if not really my taste), Eden's whole voicing and noises are... Quite odd. Is it AI, or pre-recorded lines being repurposed ? Honestly I couldn't really focus on the animation itself at first due to how odd the whole voice acting is.

    After re-watching, some movements are quite mechanical, like the POV's head movements at 0:14-0:18 and most of the riding... However, some others are well made, like Mixy's reaction to the cumshots, that caught me off-guard.

    All things considered, you can still see the effort being put into the animation overall, and even though it's not world-breaking levels of quality, it certainly is far from being bad. Keep up the good work !

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  • Honestly there's two major issues I see with this, despite it being pretty good.
    1. The movements are a biiiiit too mechanical, every time I see the mom staring it unnerves me for some reason.
    (Addition: like if I was at that age I imagine my eyes would be wandering all over the place but half the time we see her face with almost unblinking eyes, coupled with the color of the iris it's just a little creepy, sorry!)
    2. *Sigh, gonna get a lot of shit for this...* The VA.
    while I like cub content. There's a line I will not cross. and that line is when fantasy (art) spills over into RL. The boys Voice actor is either an adult way to good at making a young voice, a young boy, or an AI sampling such. The mom's VA is a bit forced an creepy.
    The voice lines were enough for me to mute it halfway through.
    (This is no way hating the artist, I love the art it's just mixed feelings!)

    Updated

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  • Pretty sure Eden's voice is just edited voice lines from Gregory in FNAF: Security Breach. Interesting choice...? Could probably have done without any voice from him though because all I could think of was Gregory the whole time lol

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  • artskunk_esmebelles said:
    Honestly there's two major issues I see with this, despite it being pretty good.
    1. The movements are a biiiiit too mechanical, every time I see the mom staring it unnerves me for some reason.
    (Addition: like if I was at that age I imagine my eyes would be wandering all over the place but half the time we see her face with almost unblinking eyes, coupled with the color of the iris it's just a little creepy, sorry!)
    2. *Sigh, gonna get a lot of shit for this...* The VA.
    while I like cub content. There's a line I will not cross. and that line is when fantasy (art) spills over into RL. The boys Voice actor is either an adult way to good at making a young voice, a young boy, or an AI sampling such. The mom's VA is a bit forced an creepy.
    The voice lines were enough for me to mute it halfway through.
    (This is no way hating the artist, I love the art it's just mixed feelings!)

    I began to wonder too, about the VA i mean. It feels wrong, especially not knowing where the samples came from. You aren't alone with that thought.

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  • artskunk_esmebelles said:
    Honestly there's two major issues I see with this, despite it being pretty good.
    1. The movements are a biiiiit too mechanical, every time I see the mom staring it unnerves me for some reason.
    (Addition: like if I was at that age I imagine my eyes would be wandering all over the place but half the time we see her face with almost unblinking eyes, coupled with the color of the iris it's just a little creepy, sorry!)
    2. *Sigh, gonna get a lot of shit for this...* The VA.
    while I like cub content. There's a line I will not cross. and that line is when fantasy (art) spills over into RL. The boys Voice actor is either an adult way to good at making a young voice, a young boy, or an AI sampling such. The mom's VA is a bit forced an creepy.
    The voice lines were enough for me to mute it halfway through.
    (This is no way hating the artist, I love the art it's just mixed feelings!)

    judging by the number of posts, the animator is a beginner. As an ex nsfw animator, I can say that the ability to breathe life into animation will come after a while, it's not worth paying attention to.

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  • Hello everyone, thank you for all the s, I was expecting some stuff being pointed out and that's completely fine. I will take everything said to improve on next animations !

    I tried alot of new things in this one, this is mainly why it has some issues and i'm sorry that it threw out immersion for you if that is the case :s

    I'm still a beginner and experimenting new things remains the best way to improve for me even if that also means some oopsies will eventually happen, but i have a huge room for improvement and all the constructive s help, so thank you to everyone who commented to help me heading the right way !

    The most obvious thing that didn't convince here is the VA from what i've read and i can understand why, Eden's VA is indeed from pre-recorded lines from games repurposed, because I did not find a person willing to do his voicelines resulting in the weirdness of said lines, I'll see what i can do for the next time the character will appear. For Mixy's VA now, it has been done with a person by any means not professional at all, some lines are even from the bloopers because i found them cute, but i digress haha.

    To sum up, I see what i need to improve on the motions and if VA is pertinent or not.

    I know that every single comments i've seen here are from good intentions so do not worry, i didn't take any of the words in a bad way <3

    Thank you everyone for checking out the animation, have a great day ! ^-^

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  • mixyway said:
    Hello everyone, thank you for all the s, I was expecting some stuff being pointed out and that's completely fine. I will take everything said to improve on next animations !

    I tried alot of new things in this one, this is mainly why it has some issues and i'm sorry that it threw out immersion for you if that is the case :s

    I'm still a beginner and experimenting new things remains the best way to improve for me even if that also means some oopsies will eventually happen, but i have a huge room for improvement and all the constructive s help, so thank you to everyone who commented to help me heading the right way !

    The most obvious thing that didn't convince here is the VA from what i've read and i can understand why, Eden's VA is indeed from pre-recorded lines from games repurposed, because I did not find a person willing to do his voicelines resulting in the weirdness of said lines, I'll see what i can do for the next time the character will appear. For Mixy's VA now, it has been done with a person by any means not professional at all, some lines are even from the bloopers because i found them cute, but i digress haha.

    To sum up, I see what i need to improve on the motions and if VA is pertinent or not.

    I know that every single comments i've seen here are from good intentions so do not worry, i didn't take any of the words in a bad way <3

    Thank you everyone for checking out the animation, have a great day ! ^-^

    I mean 👀 crowd sourcing only gets you so far… I feel like a lot of people here would be willing to… well maybe not a lot… but I think I know a guy… also as is true in regular animation, women tend to voice act young boys because most men older than 15 don’t sound that high toned.

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  • tumult said:
    Id love to see alternate versions. Like him forcibly cumming in her or accidentally doing it and impregnating her

    I agree with you some people would love that

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  • mixyway said:
    snip snip snap snap

    Healthy communication about criticism from viewer to artist and from artist to viewer, you love to see it.

    Trying out new things is always a good thing, as long as you're open for criticism, and while it wasn't perfect here, practice and communication makes perfect. I'm sure things will keep improving over time. After all, you're still rather "new" at this, and you're putting out things with far more effort and quality than even more experienced animators.

    Keep improving and keep enjoying what you do !

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  • My dear friend you have a lot of potential to be one of the best animators. Keep going.

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  • chainedwingz said:
    While Mixy's VA is good (even if not really my taste), Eden's whole voicing and noises are... Quite odd. Is it AI, or pre-recorded lines being repurposed ? Honestly I couldn't really focus on the animation itself at first due to how odd the whole voice acting is.

    After re-watching, some movements are quite mechanical, like the POV's head movements at 0:14-0:18 and most of the riding... However, some others are well made, like Mixy's reaction to the cumshots, that caught me off-guard.

    All things considered, you can still see the effort being put into the animation overall, and even though it's not world-breaking levels of quality, it certainly is far from being bad. Keep up the good work !

    They're using repurposed Gregory lines from FNAF. Would love to see a different voice actor for the kid.

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  • artskunk_esmebelles said:
    Honestly there's two major issues I see with this, despite it being pretty good.
    1. The movements are a biiiiit too mechanical, every time I see the mom staring it unnerves me for some reason.
    (Addition: like if I was at that age I imagine my eyes would be wandering all over the place but half the time we see her face with almost unblinking eyes, coupled with the color of the iris it's just a little creepy, sorry!)
    2. *Sigh, gonna get a lot of shit for this...* The VA.
    while I like cub content. There's a line I will not cross. and that line is when fantasy (art) spills over into RL. The boys Voice actor is either an adult way to good at making a young voice, a young boy, or an AI sampling such. The mom's VA is a bit forced an creepy.
    The voice lines were enough for me to mute it halfway through.
    (This is no way hating the artist, I love the art it's just mixed feelings!)

    I have to agree. Cubs can be good too An extent but this goes to far for me. Honestly not sure how too feel bout this. The effort in making it good job, but the voices creepy.

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  • honey_the_goat said:
    Why are the people explaining the origin of the voice getting downvoted?

    If you're talking about Spinfan, I'd guess it's because they mentioned it 3 different times for no reason... And because someone else already mentioned it in the message right before them

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  • Just gonna give you a tip here. As a sound effects guy, when considering the video, decide whether to go realistic or simplistic. , beds don't just make the springs sounds, there's people on top of the bed rubbing on the blanket and comforter, there are cloth and foley sounds that are made when sex happens.

    In porn you don't notice it because it is cohesive and makes sense, or the foley sounds are cut completely. When it's just one sound, that makes the one sound feel out of place. Thus you notice it.

    I see what you're trying to do and that's commendable. But I suggest cutting the sound for now until you get the hang of it. The voice work is good, but maybe you should look for someone who does "shota" voice acting. The Gregory lines are a bit off putting because they're spliced.

    But your animation is good as well as your models. Keep going, everything improves with time. 👍

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  • Honestly, this animation would be infinitely better if you just stripped out the male voice. If you just replaced the male voice with TEXT because otherwise it wouldn't make sense, that'd still be better than this.

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  • ...well that was amazing
    putting it lightly a full pov of mother and son with VAing? i mean
    yeah this is basically perfection
    and it was done really well too i really hope there more down the line this is just simply amazing

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